Let it snow.

One thing that i really liked is how descriptive they were in the story. One example of something that i liked was when they said "they would be frozen like mastodons in blocks of ice." Another thing that really set a picture in my head of the surroundings was when the were talking about what the car looked like and how it had chains on its tires. This made it really clear what the kids were seeing and going through.

One thing that i did not like is how the writer seemed to really rush the story, there was a lack of feeling because it was just like one thing right after another. Another thing that i did not like was the ending. It was short and it did not seem to fit the story well. I think there should have been longer and ending. It just left me wondering

goals

some of my goals for this english calss it to learn how to be a better writer. i always have liked writing but there is always some points that i have trouble with. i tend to get stuck trying to start the paper, once i get started it is pretty easy but it is just that starting paragraph i have trouble with. i also want to be able to learn how to be more decripive with my storys.
As a student i hope to get more serious about school. i tend to kind of slack with most school things like puting them off till the last minet or just saying i will do it later. i really want to rase my gpa so i can get into my sonography program and really excel in it. i hope to be done with school with in the next 2 years and then i have my 9 mounth program that i will have to finish before i will be able to work up at the hospital that my mom is working at.