One thing that i really liked is how descriptive they were in the story. One example of something that i liked was when they said "they would be frozen like mastodons in blocks of ice." Another thing that really set a picture in my head of the surroundings was when the were talking about what the car looked like and how it had chains on its tires. This made it really clear what the kids were seeing and going through.
One thing that i did not like is how the writer seemed to really rush the story, there was a lack of feeling because it was just like one thing right after another. Another thing that i did not like was the ending. It was short and it did not seem to fit the story well. I think there should have been longer and ending. It just left me wondering
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Rushed is a great word to describe some of the issues in the writing. I think that explains the jumping around problems so people had.
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