Tuesday, October 30, 2007
Rough Draft
My rough draf is just that really really rough. i am having a really hard time finding good information about 3d and 4d imaging. ever time i go to google or yahoo and type in any thing about 3d and or 4 d imaging all that it gives me is information about a spacific hospital and not information about the actual imaging. i have reasearched for about 2 to 3 hous straight and then just got frustersted and gave up. i know alot about my subject all ready so basicly my whole paper is all abut my knowlage and little facts that i have found online. this paper is very irratating
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Think about other areas of 3d and 4d imagining that you might want to explore. Is it being used by people other than hospitals? What is the history of this technology? Who invented it? When did people first start using it?
What you have so far is good. Your paragraphs are all about 1 thing and don't go off track. Watch your grammar carefully, I saw several errors here and there.
To help you add length, you might want to make your first paragraph your 2nd paragraph and write a different introduction. Telling a story how it is used or something along the lines.
very interesting
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