Story about the Accountant/Stripper

Bob woke up on an early Friday morning and he realized that he was late from picking up little Stacy and little Bob jr from both of the different mothers houses. So he jumped up, took a quick shower them hurried off to pick them up. He did not have any plans to do with the kids so he decided to take them back to his home and take them bowling. After a fun day with the kids he took them both back to their mothers houses and he had to go start getting ready for work. As he was getting ready he decided that he was kinda tired so he layed down just for a min he said. Well the min turned in to hours and when he finally woke up he found himself late for work. As he was running around scrambling for his clothes that he was going to wear he found a bright see through shirt and dress pants. Bob was more open with what is job was that most people are when they are in the stripping profession like he is.
Bobs life was a lot different than most. Standing only 5 foot 5 inches he was kind of a short guy. He has red hair, glasses, and big feet. Things like having five kids with all different moms at the age of 25, naming his dog gpaw, and having the profession of an accountant stripper made him even more of a weird guy. Bob has never told his kids what he does for a living, all they know is that their dad lives above a bowling ally and that is really fun to them. Bob has tried to turn his life around many times but it usually never works for him. Once he tried to get a new job and even move out from his parents house, the whole moving out thing did eventually work out for him. He now lives in an apartment above a very smoky, loud bowling ally.
Bob drive a beautiful new car. After a very successful night at the club where he works part time he went out and bought a brand new mustang. Bright red convertible top he thought he was a stud. But it didn’t matter what he thought, all that matter was what the ladies thought. Nobody around town had a clue as o why so many people threw themselves at Bob, they just knew that people did. For gosh sakes, he had five children already at the age of 25. Now that’s a lot of kids.
After he realized how late he actually was, he ran the kids back home, jumped in the car and was out for a night of money making bliss. After a few hours on stage, he decided that it was late and he had to get home to be able to actually make it to his side job, accounting, in the morning. So he raced home and ran up the stairs to his apartment, barging in the door like he actually owned the place. He jumped into bad with a smile on his face, you would too if you made all the money he had that nice.
Bob may seem average, but he has the type of charm that can knock a lady off her feet, and he does. So even thow this is not the life I would want to live it seems pretty ok for little old Bob. And as long as he is ok with it I guess I am to.

what i have learned

through out the entire semester i thought i was a strong writer. as the semester went on i have found that i was not as good as i thoughi was. i have found out taht i do not do a very good job with prewriting. i am also not very good with research papers. i really feel i have grown as a strong writer. i really htink that i have become a better writer.
Thanks

Writing process

i have found that with this paper my writing process really helped. firse i brain stormed about what i want to write about and then i broke that list down to things that i knew alot about. afrer narowing my list down i settled on writnig about Prison Break. after i figured this out i began brainstorming on a web what i want to talk about. i had alot of different things branching off of my web but it really seemed to help me in the end when it came time to write my paper. i have found out that if i do a good prewriting it mkes it easer to write the paper off of it.

Questions about my writng

I think the strengths of my writing is when we get to write about our personal experences. i am verry good at using alot of decription in my papers so i htink that is why i do so well in those typws of papers. our first paper was my best paper because i was able to talk about something that has really impacted my life. this paper was easy for me but it was also hard in the same note. it was easy because i was able to vent about a really dificult time in my life. it was hard to because i had to open up to people that i did not know and tell them about my life.
i think what was good with my reflecive paper was the amount of detail i put into it. i made people reallly see waht thik kind of experence is really like. i think that in my this i believe paper i really expressed my deeings about my dog and how i lucky i was to have found him. in my research paper i talkes about a profession that i am intrested in going into.
i think i need improvement on grammer of corse but i also think i could use more dialog in my papers. there are some papers that i could have really used some dialog but i didnt.
With my reflective paper i think u could use more dialog so that peopel can really read the feelings that were going on that day. I think with my this i believe paper i could tell more about what chance is like know that he had grown up a little bit. an with my research i thhink i couls put a little more data in there.
with my writing process i hace found that i like to do the little web thing. i have always liked to do that because i am not a very organized person and i think the web is messy. i just hink it fits me more.

Total # of Blog posts
19 (u have my simpsons blog)

Total # of GPAW hours
7