I think the strengths of my writing is when we get to write about our personal experences. i am verry good at using alot of decription in my papers so i htink that is why i do so well in those typws of papers. our first paper was my best paper because i was able to talk about something that has really impacted my life. this paper was easy for me but it was also hard in the same note. it was easy because i was able to vent about a really dificult time in my life. it was hard to because i had to open up to people that i did not know and tell them about my life.
i think what was good with my reflecive paper was the amount of detail i put into it. i made people reallly see waht thik kind of experence is really like. i think that in my this i believe paper i really expressed my deeings about my dog and how i lucky i was to have found him. in my research paper i talkes about a profession that i am intrested in going into.
i think i need improvement on grammer of corse but i also think i could use more dialog in my papers. there are some papers that i could have really used some dialog but i didnt.
With my reflective paper i think u could use more dialog so that peopel can really read the feelings that were going on that day. I think with my this i believe paper i could tell more about what chance is like know that he had grown up a little bit. an with my research i thhink i couls put a little more data in there.
with my writing process i hace found that i like to do the little web thing. i have always liked to do that because i am not a very organized person and i think the web is messy. i just hink it fits me more.
Total # of Blog posts
19 (u have my simpsons blog)
Total # of GPAW hours
7
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